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AQA English GCSE/A Level Snapshots > Saturday, August-07-2010

William Blake's Tyger and The Mentalist( last episode season two).

Tyger! Tyger! burning bright
In the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Could frame thy fearful symmetry?

In what distant deeps or skies
Burnt the fire of thine eyes?
On what wings dare he aspire?
What the hand dare sieze the fire?

 

The serial killer 'Red John' whispered the first stanza of Blake's famous poem to the Mentalist, Simon James as the latter was wrapped in cellophane by murderously inclined college pretenders to Red John's  grotesque 'throne'. Much debate has followed since as to the possible significance of this poem/riddle, especially as the poem seemed to suggest a link to the whereabouts of the missing psychic love interest, Kristin. Interestingly one of  our last glimpses of the Mentalist shows him smiling 'as if ' his worries have somehow been alleviated.

Surely the crux of the poem hands around the phrase 'fearful symmetry' : symmetry is more than 'sameness'...it is reflection and refraction. Perhaps it is not that Kristin's confidence about Red John's intentions originate from arrogance, stupidity or even that 'she' is Red John? Rather than she is his TWIN! Hence she can be understanding, compassionately communicative and provocative? It would also tie in with the Blakean interest in 'fearful symmetry' between the songs of Innocence and experience. Each sequence reflects and refracts the other- even defines the other.



AQA English GCSE/A Level Snapshots > Sunday, October-04-2009

Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice Chapter 34

While settling this point, she was suddenly roused by the sound of the door bell, and her spirits were a little fluttered by the idea of its being Colonel Fitzwilliam himself, who had once before called late in the evening, and might now come to enquire particularly after her. But this idea was soon banished, and her spirits were very differently affected, when, to her utter amazement, she saw Mr. Darcy walk into the room. In an hurried manner he immediately began an enquiry after her health, imputing his visit to a wish of hearing that she were better. She answered him with cold civility. He sat down for a few moments, and then getting up, walked about the room. Elizabeth was surprised, but said not a word. After a silence of several minutes, he came towards her in an agitated manner, and thus began,

"In vain have I struggled. It will not do. My feelings will not be repressed. You must allow me to tell you how ardently I admire and love you."

Elizabeth's astonishment was beyond expression. She stared, coloured, doubted, and was silent. This he considered sufficient encouragement, and the avowal of all that he felt and had long felt for her immediately followed. He spoke well, but there were feelings besides those of the heart to be detailed, and he was not more eloquent on the subject of tenderness than of pride. His sense of her inferiority -- of its being a degradation -- of the family obstacles which judgment had always opposed to inclination, were dwelt on with a warmth which seemed due to the consequence he was wounding, but was very unlikely to recommend his suit.

AQA English GCSE/A Level Snapshots > Friday, October-02-2009

Tess of the D'Urbervilles by Thomas Hardy

D'Urberville stopped the horse, withdrew his feet from the stirrups, turned sideways on the saddle, and enclosed her waist with his arm to support her.

This immediately put her on the defensive, and with one of those sudden impulses of reprisal to which she was liable she gave him a little push from her. In his ticklish position he nearly lost his balance and only just avoided rolling over into the road, the horse, though a powerful one, being fortunately the quietest he rode.

"That is devilish unkind!" he said. "I mean no harm--only to keep you from falling."

She pondered suspiciously; till, thinking that this might after all be true, she relented, and said quite humbly, "I beg your pardon, sir."

Tess of the D'Urbervilles 

Chapter 11 of Hardy's novel is pivotal to the tragedy of tess. In this chapter Alec D'urberville, a supposed distant relation of the beautiful country girl Tess, offers her assistance on her way home, only to take sexual advantage of her innocence and 'sleep' . Whilst Hardy's langauge purposely obscures the extent of the sexual violation later in the chapter, the reader is convinced that his behaviour towards Tess constitutes rape and leds eventually to the execution of Tess for her revenge killing of Alec.

This earlier incident in the chapter reveals the intuitive aspect of Tess, particularly where Alec is concerned. Here her natural physical reaction is to repulse the philandering hands of her so-called helper/rescuer. Tess instinctively recognises his predatory intentions, yet is forced to deny her respsonses.

Alec's affectation of hurt is Freudian in its attempt to mislead her. How appropriate is his self-summary of 'devilish unkind'! This accentuates his villain status and makes his lust still more reprehensible.

The following sentence is psychologically revealing and makes consummate use of free indirect discourse. We hear and observe the process of Tess's thoughts regarding Alec. 'She pondered suspiciously;' - how effective the deployment of the semi-colon which suggest both pause and doubt. Tess is trying to asssimilate the tension here between intuition/instinct and more 'rational' thinking which seems dangerously repectful of Alec's material status. The precariousness  of the verb 'might' highlights the destructive social conditioning which Tess and others have had to endure and accept. We feel it almost an imperative to warn her, to cry out 'No! ' when we hear the verb 'relented'..for this action betrays her own instinct which is 'naturally' alarmed by Alec's duplicitous behaviour.

She yields to Alec's chauvinistic actions 'humbly' and once again addresses him as 'sir' , an action which makes the reader shudder at her victimisation within a system that will eventaully kill her. The class system conspires against her twofold: as a woman and as a member of the working class. Thus, for all her beauty and the novel's use of fre indirect discourse to privilege her point of view and inner life/world, Tess is irrevocably doomed. No one can or will save her from her determined 'fate'.


AQA English GCSE/A Level Snapshots > Tuesday, September-29-2009

Before you were mine: Carol Ann Duffy

Before You Were Mine

 

I'm ten years away from the corner you laugh on

with your pals, Maggie McGeeney and Jean Duff.

The three of you bend from the waist, holding

each other, or your knees, and shriek at the pavement.

Your polka-dot dress blows round your legs. Marilyn.

 

I'm not here yet. The thought of me doesn't occur

in the ballroom with the thousand eyes, the fizzy, movie tomorrows

the right walk home could bring. I knew you would dance

like that. Before you were mine, your Ma stands at the close

with a hiding for the late one. You reckon it's worth it.

 

The decade ahead of my loud, possessive yell was the best one, eh?

I remember my hands in those high-heeled red shoes, relics,

and now your ghost clatters toward me over George Square

till I see you, clear as scent, under the tree,

with its lights, and whose small bites on your neck, sweetheart?

 

Cha cha cha! You'd teach me the steps on the way home from Mass, stamping stars from the wrong pavement. Even then

I wanted the bold girl winking in Portobello, somewhere

in Scotland, before I was born. That glamorous love lasts

where you sparkle and waltz and laugh before you were mine.

 

Poet Laureate Carol Ann Duffy 

Carol Ann Duffy is a time traveller. Her poetry frequently steps to one side of an experience and redraws its  ostensible shape, smudging away at any exclusive edges, so that the supposed fixity of an experience or relationship becomes more plastic,more malleable. I love this creativity in Duffy, this capacity for the 'what if' or 'reframe' in Carol Ann Duffy. For like all great writers, she is prepared to renegotiate experience and the past. She believes in resurrection through remembrance, and is prepared to play with remembrance(and I am aware of the seemingly dangerous and dismissive triteness of this term 'play' )  in order to discover the potential for reconciliation and even redemption.

One of Carol Ann Duffy's recent poems as the new Poet Laureate is entitled 'Premonitions' which tries to renegotiate the shattering numbness of losing your mother, through a cinematic reversal of the progresssive destruction of a loved one through terminal illness. 'Before you were mine' is an earlier poem and celebrates Duffy's mother from a very different viewpoint, though both deal with concepts of death in very different ways. The death before birth in 'Before you were Mine' and the role of writing to reanimate those lost literally to us through death.We talk about 'going on' but perhaps the direction of this platitude is more open to question than custom would have us belive. For where is the future direction and journey which will lead us 'on' tfrom the numbness of despair? Perhaps time travelling is the only secular resurrection available for an atheist like Carol Ann Duffy?

The poem above captures the daughter's wonder at the time before she was born when her mother was 'free' of responsibility for her family. All the images and escapades fed into this tender, joyful portriat of her mother seem a conglomeration of most likely repeated family tales, 'Marilyn' all woven into this resonant elegy to lost time. The synasthaesia of ' I see you clear as scent' underlines the delight and intimacy of this time travelling act of teasing love. It is as if one can remember what one has never literraly experienced but has stilled experienced vicariously through loving attentiveness to the details of another's stories.

We are the stuff of anecdotes. Story telling is not a second hand substitute for 'real' life. It is the very stuff of life itself!

 


AQA English GCSE/A Level Snapshots > Sunday, September-27-2009

Charles Dickens: A Trial For Murder

When the murder was first discovered, no suspicion fell--or I ought
rather to say, for I cannot be too precise in my facts, it was
nowhere publicly hinted that any suspicion fell--on the man who was
afterwards brought to trial. As no reference was at that time made
to him in the newspapers, it is obviously impossible that any
description of him can at that time have been given in the
newspapers. It is essential that this fact be remembered.

Unfolding at breakfast my morning paper, containing the account of
that first discovery, I found it to be deeply interesting, and I
read it with close attention. I read it twice, if not three times.
The discovery had been made in a bedroom, and, when I laid down the
paper, I was aware of a flash--rush--flow--I do not know what to
call it,--no word I can find is satisfactorily descriptive,--in
which I seemed to see that bedroom passing through my room, like a
picture impossibly painted on a running river. Though almost
instantaneous in its passing, it was perfectly clear; so clear that
I distinctly, and with a sense of relief, observed the absence of
the dead body from the bed.

It was in no romantic place that I had this curious sensation, but
in chambers in Piccadilly, very near to the corner of St. James's
Street. It was entirely new to me. I was in my easy-chair at the
moment, and the sensation was accompanied with a peculiar shiver
which started the chair from its position. (But it is to be noted
that the chair ran easily on castors.) I went to one of the windows
(there are two in the room, and the room is on the second floor) to
refresh my eyes with the moving objects down in Piccadilly. It was
a bright autumn morning, and the street was sparkling and cheerful.
The wind was high. As I looked out, it brought down from the Park a
quantity of fallen leaves, which a gust took, and whirled into a
spiral pillar. As the pillar fell and the leaves dispersed, I saw
two men on the opposite side of the way, going from West to East.
They were one behind the other. The foremost man often looked back
over his shoulder. The second man followed him, at a distance of
some thirty paces, with his right hand menacingly raised. First,
the singularity and steadiness of this threatening gesture in so
public a thoroughfare attracted my attention; and next, the more
remarkable circumstance that nobody heeded it. Both men threaded
their way among the other passengers with a smoothness hardly
consistent even with the action of walking on a pavement; and no
single creature, that I could see, gave them place, touched them, or
looked after them. In passing before my windows, they both stared
up at me. I saw their two faces very distinctly, and I knew that I
could recognise them anywhere. Not that I had consciously noticed
anything very remarkable in either face, except that the man who
went first had an unusually lowering appearance, and that the face
of the man who followed him was of the colour of impure wax.

The Trial for Murder

How curious the representation of the initial 'haunting' is? Indeed there is a strange lyricism, a pastoral lyricism to the Coleridge -like room floating before the narrator into his own private space. There is no antecedent to this sudden psychical  manifestation, just a declared interest in a murder without initial suspect and a disclosure of repetition around the original report of the murder.  So what is this awareness of a 'flash-rush-flow' ? It seems both creative and ungoverned by conscious deliberation. The hyphens emphasise the breakdown in the conventional systems of knowing and in the separation betwen this thought and another. Everything seems seamless and seeming.  ( Hence my feelings reminding me of Kubla Khan with the appearance of the floating Pleasure dome! )

And the tension between the daily rituals of the domestic, of place;' Unfolding at breakfast my morning paper..' with this sudden manifestation of otherness. You cannot take away an appearance of something even and especiallly of course when its appearance is deemed 'impossible'. The brilliance of Dickens' perception centres too around the absence of a body on the bed. This is not mere Gothic horror. We have Romantic visitation which elevates the speaker to poet, to shaman. And then the body is not there. He has to look outside to see something seemingly ordinary and unrelated. And he does so on his special castor running chair. Once again a joke on Dickens' part yet capturing the desire of the narrator to ground the extraordinary within and without the ordinary!

A whirl of leaves and perhaps a shape shifter's presence and then we see, as he sees the unreal 'smoothness' of the two men passing along the thorough fare. The picture is marked for its singularity. One unusual sighting is followed by another, all ostensibly anchored to specific places at specific times. just as in The Signalman, geography seems signficant yet remains unresolved. A man looks down on others and 'sees' something  that operates as a riddle for the rest of the story. Yet why the narrator should be gifted by such a visitation and why he 'recognises' bothe the killer and the victim remains uncertain. It just IS!!!

 

A fabulous wonderful tale. LITERALLY!


 


AQA English GCSE/A Level Snapshots > Sunday, September-27-2009

Charles Dickens: The Signalman


"Halloa! Below there!"

When he heard a voice thus calling to him, he was standing at the door of his box, with a flag in his hand, furled round its short pole. One would have thought, considering the nature of the ground, that he could not have doubted from what quarter the voice came; but instead of looking up to where I stood on the top of the steep cutting nearly over his head, he turned himself about, and looked down the Line. There was something remarkable in his manner of doing so, though I could not have said for my life what. But I know it was remarkable enough to attract my notice, even though his figure was foreshortened and shadowed, down in the deep trench, and mine was high above him, so steeped in the glow of an angry sunset, that I had shaded my eyes with my hand before I saw him at all.

"Halloa! Below!"

From looking down the Line, he turned himself about again, and, raising his eyes, saw my figure high above him.

"Is there any path by which I can come down and speak to you?"

He looked up at me without replying, and I looked down at him without pressing him too soon with a repetition of my idle question. Just then there came a vague vibration in the earth and air, quickly changing into a violent pulsation, and an oncoming rush that caused me to start back, as though it had force to draw me down. When such vapour as rose to my height from this rapid train had passed me, and was skimming away over the landscape, I looked down again, and saw him refurling the flag he had shown while the train went by.

Dickens' publishers, 

This story tantalises as it slips away from the reader's grasp at 'truth'. For where is 'truth' in this story? Should we believe the fears of the lonely, isolated signalman who believes he is being haunted by a figure of nemesis foretellling death and destruction? Or should we view such terrible, repetitions of horror as the synptoms of a sick dis-eased mind, and cling to the rational observations of the unnamed narrator and visitor to the signalman's solitary world?

My son is studying this text for his English Literature GCSE and I am very grateful to have a reason to reread this text which refuses to declare its full significance and which evades our ability to locate and name 'truth'.

My first assumption centred around a dislike of the narrator who seemed a rather malignant interloper into the crypt-like wolrd of the signalman. The narrator's words ironically mirror those of the signalman's nemesis and it seemed quite possible to this reader that the narrator IS the nemesis without perhaps even realising this in any conscious or direct way. 

I do wonder too at Dickens' superb ability to explore the tension between repetition and coincidence, and the ambivalence of coinicidence when it becomes symbolically retranslated by an unnerved mind, as fate.  Lives are riddled by patterns( and our desire to discern and recognise patterns) and in this story the bemused and bedevilled signalman finds the revisitations of both nemesis and narrator so unsettling that it seems he chooses to embrace the certainty of literal extinction rather than the  mentally destabilising uncertainty of progressive mental terror.

The Signalman, as the story's title insinuates,  explores the lonely predicament of a railway worker whose daily rituals are primarily concerned with safety. His literal 'signals' avert death. Yet the story's dramatic irony reveals the strange 'signals' that the story's protagonist appears to be receiving from a source unknown; revenant perhaps or just misunderstood manifestations of a lonely mind?

The extract above is taken from the opneing of the sory and I love the disorientating feel of the setting. Where is the narrator and where is the signalman? And how are these geographical positions crucial to our understanding of the story and even its possible resolution? For the dark, deep crypt-like situation of the signalman with the damp, gloomy apsect is suggestive of hell, of a 'fallen' post Edenic world. Such a setting is mirrored by the feverish quality of the signalman's words, who attaches a disturbing fatalism to the actions and utterances of the haunting figure. If Dickens' did rightly ( from direct experience of a railway crash) attach considerable danger to  Victorian Industrialisation and  railway system, then the sinister, monstruous appearance of the steam train hurtling out of its dark, tunnel-lair fulfils many Freudian nightmares as well as contrasting the inhuman and mechanistic against the malleable and human.

The powerful irony of the first utterance of the tale, encapsulates the dilemna and problem of the tale. Who is 'down there' and why is such an utterance shared between several figures, all contributing inevitably to the destruction of the signalman himself? ( who has been lowered into this pit by circumstance and social failure).

I love the playfulness of the title. What are signals after all? Can a signal exist without an audience and even translator? And is it merely a sign of the signalman's mental disorientation that he seeks the origin of the voice in the tunnel or is it in fact a gesture more revealing of the narrator's sinister duplicity? In other words, who can we trust to tell us where the origin of truth lies?!  Everything in the story is created for us by the narrator. Could he create himself to suit his story? Of course! And part of the game of the tale is its slipperiness. Its meaning always seems to slip away, to evade us.

The Signalman is afterall a tale of narrative incarceration and entrapment....whatever you decide you know it is your decision and that other versions or readings haunt every turn of the tale.

How provocative the existential question:

"Is there any path by which I can come down and speak to you?"

What an ironic metaphor!

What is the answer and who can really respond to this almost Faustian question! Would you follow such a path?

 


AQA English GCSE/A Level Snapshots > Thursday, July-30-2009

Valentine by Carol Ann Duffy

 
Not a red rose or a satin heart.

I give you an onion.
It is a moon wrapped in brown paper.
It promises light
like the careful undressing of love.

Here.
It will blind you with tears
like a lover.
It will make your reflection
a wobbling photo of grief.

I am trying to be truthful.

Not a cute card or a kissogram.

I give you an onion.
Its fierce kiss will stay on your lips,
possessive and faithful
as we are,
for as long as we are.

Take it.
Its platinum loops shrink to a wedding-ring,
if you like.

Lethal.
Its scent will cling to your fingers,
cling to your knife.
I love (Carol Ann Duffy's 
Commentary:
I include this poem today as it is so popular with many readers and the central image so effective at communicating the ambivalence of love. The ubiquitousness of an 'onion' provokes the surprise of the poem and everyone who has ever been in love can immediately relate to the uneven effects of intensity! Of course Carol Ann duffy wants to deconstruct the kitsch of Valentine's day where love is commodified and wrapped or else deal with the repercussions! The poem forecfully  wanders around the metaphorical possibilities of love as an onion and satisfies the reader with the witty intelligence of this conceit. That said, the cynicism and knowingness of Duffy's speaker seem to work at just one level. Indeed this reads to me as a form of  'poetic work -out'. Duffy flexes her poetic muscles and lo- here is a smart poem. It makes you smile and but is there anything else I wonder? Does any emotional residue remain? Perhaps it doesn't need to. But I find this poem rather like candyfloss. Colourful and immediately edible but leaves you stil hungry and with sugar on your teeth!  

AQA English GCSE/A Level Snapshots > Friday, June-12-2009

Ozymandias by Shelley

I MET a traveller from an antique land  
Who said:—Two vast and trunkless legs of stone  
Stand in the desert. Near them on the sand,  
Half sunk, a shatter'd visage lies, whose frown  
And wrinkled lip and sneer of cold command          5
Tell that its sculptor well those passions read  
Which yet survive, stamp'd on these lifeless things,  
The hand that mock'd them and the heart that fed.  
And on the pedestal these words appear:  
"My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:   10
Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!"  
Nothing beside remains: round the decay  
Of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare,  
The lone and level sands stretch far away.  
 

AQA English GCSE/A Level Snapshots > Wednesday, May-13-2009

The role of Romantic love in the poem?

View: Poetry of Keats 

AQA English GCSE/A Level Snapshots > Wednesday, May-13-2009

Ishiguro: The Remains of the Day

THE REMAINS OF THE DAY book cover 
What and how does the title of the novel signify  in the light  of your reading of the text?