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Wordsworth The Prelude(extract) Analysis of AQA Anthology poem.

One summer evening (led by her) I found

A little boat tied to a willow tree

Within a rocky cove, its usual home.

Straight I unloosed her chain, and stepping in

Pushed from the shore. It was an act of stealth

And troubled pleasure, nor without the voice

Of mountain-echoes did my boat move on;

Leaving behind her still, on either side,

Small circles glittering idly in the moon,

Until they melted all into one track

Of sparkling light. But now, like one who rows,

Proud of his skill, to reach a chosen point

With an unswerving line, I fixed my view

Upon the summit of a craggy ridge,

The horizon’s utmost boundary; far above

Was nothing but the stars and the grey sky.

She was an elfin pinnace; lustily

I dipped my oars into the silent lake,

And, as I rose upon the stroke, my boat

Went heaving through the water like a swan;

When, from behind that craggy steep till then

The horizon’s bound, a huge peak, black and huge,

As if with voluntary power instinct,

Upreared its head. I struck and struck again,

And growing still in stature the grim shape

Towered up between me and the stars, and still,

For so it seemed, with purpose of its own

And measured motion like a living thing,

Strode after me. With trembling oars I turned,

And through the silent water stole my way

Back to the covert of the willow tree;

There in her mooring-place I left my bark, –

And through the meadows homeward went, in grave

And serious mood; but after I had seen

That spectacle, for many days, my brain

Worked with a dim and undetermined sense

Of unknown modes of being; o’er my thoughts

There hung a darkness, call it solitude

Or blank desertion. No familiar shapes

Remained, no pleasant images of trees,

Of sea or sky, no colours of green fields;

But huge and mighty forms, that do not live

Like living men, moved slowly through the mind

By day, and were a trouble to my dreams.

Overview.

Wordsworth is a poet who makes recollection central to creativity: for without memory, Wordsworth would argue, ‘we’ cannot or do not exist, for our identity is built upon remembrance.

Think about it.

Look at the way the word ‘re-collection’ is assembled and what it is assembling.

Remember how we remember.

Are we not fragments of this memory and that?

Shards of ‘being’ in one place and then another: feeling this and that; putting together our sense of a ‘me’ through all these parts of re-collected experience?

It is hardly surprising that when a memory is challenged, we may literally feel as as if the ‘I/me’ is falling into bits.

The Prelude is a long, autobiographical poem by Wordsworth who explores his past in the text, through a series of recollections.

The title of this long Romantic poem, suggests  that these events and emotions are a’Prelude’ to his  adult self or being.

It is as if by narrating tales of his past, the first person narrator can ‘arrive’ at his identity.

Worth Thinking about.

Wordsworth’s poem has similarities to Norman MacCaig’s ‘Below the Green Corrie as it explores the enduring impact of nature, particularly a wild, ungoverned. ancient nature that is awe inspiring and  dangerous.

Both poets find such natural places characters in their own right and these personified versions of nature both fascinate and terrify, hence their enduring impact on the writers.

We wonder at the identity of the ‘her’ in the poem and accept that this mysterious female is a presence whose influence remains compelling and unresolved. Such a presence is deliberately open to interpretation as this makes the poem more Romantic and alluring.

The ‘her’ seems sometimes to be the special, even magical boat, sometimes the landscape itself-ungoverned by mortal, human considerations or control.

Finally we feel the poem suggests an experience that unsettles and trobles teh writer. It seems to explaore a form of haunting and communicates a series of images ‘that do not live /Like living men..’

In other words this is a poem about ‘things’ beyond human translation or comprehension. ‘A trouble to my dreams’

The intial sense of setting off with a direction and purpose, yields to fearfulness and disorientation: ‘Unknown modes of being’. Perhaps it is the otherness of this experience that haunts the poet most powerfully.

Human beings have to accept their ultimate inconsequentiality too.  Yet the Romantic irony remains that it is the genius of the poet which  creates the poem.

The ‘I’  is special enough to have the experience because he is exceptional and unlike ordinary men.

Analysis to Follow.


2 thoughts on “Wordsworth The Prelude(extract) Analysis of AQA Anthology poem.”

  1. Do you not think it’s fair to mention how the whole of ‘The Prelude’ foreshadows the key themes of the Romantics as well as utilising what they believed in completely? This analysis is really basic and doesn’t delve into the depths of what this extract tells the reader.

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