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Untitled:50 word miniSTORY

Janet Lewison
Bolton
UK
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Late July and the  grey tarmac was melting. A fat girl stole the cabbage white butterfly from my yellow  bucket and squashed it because she could.

Barefoot, my brother and I bickered  over becoming Huck  Finn. Bravely, we climbed the hot garage roof, sailed down the Mississippi and spat. 

http://miniwords2009.sharedspace.org/ministories/ministories5.html

 

Just learnt before Xmas that I had a commended place in the miniSTORY competition where you have to write a 50 word tale. Apparently nearly 2000 entered so I am very pleased with this story and even more so as it is true and about me and my brother Duncan! I can still feel the heat of that summer with its tarmac and my anger at the girl who came uninvited to my garden and squashed my rescue butterfly living harmlessly  in my Dad’s wheelbarrow lingers on…!

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