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English Tuition Bolton: Virginia Woolf’s perfect sentence of 181 words? ‘On being ill.’

 

 

 

 

(Here’s a wandering, wondering mind! I love the lucidity of Woolf’s best writing and here, in a sentence of 181 words, she thoroughly imagines the ‘foreign lands’ of illness. The ascendancy of the comma over the semi-colon engenders grace and suppresses pontification. Woolf’s reference to ‘the pit of death’ evokes a teasing lightness that ultimately seems painfully sad when we consider Woolf’s own final illness and suicide. )

 

 

CONSIDERING how common illness is, how tremen-
dous the spiritual change that it brings, how aston-
ishing, when the lights of health go down, the undiscovered 
countries that are then disclosed, what wastes and deserts 
of the soul a slight attack of influenza brings to light, what 
precipices and lawns sprinkled with bright flowers a little 
rise of temperature reveals, what ancient and obdurate 
oaks are uprooted in us in the act of sickness, how we go 
down into the pit of death and feel the waters of annihilation 
close above our heads and wake thinking to find ourselves 
in the presence of the angels and the harpers when we 
have a tooth out and come to the surface in the dentist’s 
arm chair and confuse his ‘Rinse the mouth—rinse the 
mouth’ with the greeting of the Deity stooping from the 
floor of Heaven to welcome us—when we think of this
an infinitely more, as we are so frequently forced to 
think of it, it becomes strange indeed that illness has not 
taken its place with love, battle, and jealousy among the 
prime themes of literature. 

 

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